Rosey,Christie,Terrance,Adam,Paul.- Personification & Repetition

Personification;

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"Darling Harbour where buildings with the eyes gouged out"
This allows for audience to understand that 'Darling Harbour' has human characteristics and makes the reader feel intimidated that such a big object could be 'looking' at them.
This links back to Distinctive voices as Day has created a link between an imaginary world with reality. This is done through the use of eyes on a well known Australian icon Darling Harbour.

Repetition;

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"Dry, So Dry i had to prise it all out"
Through the use of repetition emphasis has been made on how the character has felt about martini. This creates a sympathetic and subjective feeling/sense (taste, or perhaps smell) for the reader.